I was waiting for her. I was waiting to find out the results of a pregnancy test. I was waiting to find out if I would indeed be a father and I was excited to not only start a family but to start a family with her.
Wow…nothing more to say. I love all the musical aspects about it. Good job!!!
September 16, 2013
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I think you have captured this moment very nicely in this song. Even the music has an anxious sound to it which supports the lyrics and story very nice. I like the first two verses very much. It really set the tone. Good stuff. Can’t wait to hear others. Thanks for sharing.
June 08, 2013
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Wow…nothing more to say. I love all the musical aspects about it. Good job!!!
September 16, 2013
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I think you have captured this moment very nicely in this song. Even the music has an anxious sound to it which supports the lyrics and story very nice. I like the first two verses very much. It really set the tone. Good stuff. Can’t wait to hear others. Thanks for sharing.
June 08, 2013
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