One I did ten years ago. Needs a serious lyric rewrite, but I LOVE the music, and the lyric theme is a sound idea
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I'm not a saint
But I know when I have
Earned the right to lay
Moonlight on ruby fields
And I will take my time
On this perfect night
As we lay here with our
Starry eyes
Let's run away
With your heart so happy in my hands << (hate this line!!!!!!)
Take on our hopes and dreams
Let's stay this way forever always
I've been rolling all my life
I spy your pretty face
With my little eye
I like what I see
As we lay here with our
Starry eyes
I'm not a saint
But I know when I have
Earned the right to lay
Moonlight on ruby fields
And I will take my time
On this perfect night
As we lay here with our
Starry eyes
Just being free
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