Impressive, Inspiring, and it’s an incredible song. Would have liked to see the lyrics though.
April 18, 2017
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Great first line. Your voice is really good too. It accompanies your songs very nicely. The first part of the song really engaged me. I started to lose focus right before the solo though. I like how you pulled me back in right after the solo with a nice change up. Not a huge fan of the two parts where you sing “There will come a day”.. I feel like that may be when I lose connection with the rest of the song. All in all I see some really cool gems in this. Thanks for sharing it!
I’d love to get your thoughts on any of my tracks being that we are in the same genre. Also have you checked out Caryn and Travis’s stuff yet? I think you may like it.
June 08, 2013
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Impressive, Inspiring, and it’s an incredible song. Would have liked to see the lyrics though.
April 18, 2017
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Dennis Field
Great first line. Your voice is really good too. It accompanies your songs very nicely. The first part of the song really engaged me. I started to lose focus right before the solo though. I like how you pulled me back in right after the solo with a nice change up. Not a huge fan of the two parts where you sing “There will come a day”.. I feel like that may be when I lose connection with the rest of the song. All in all I see some really cool gems in this. Thanks for sharing it!
I’d love to get your thoughts on any of my tracks being that we are in the same genre. Also have you checked out Caryn and Travis’s stuff yet? I think you may like it.
June 08, 2013
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