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The invitation to a special someone
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Be With Me
V1
Standing right her
before our dream starts
Searching to find the key
Restrained and controlled
never exposed
Be who your meant to be
Chorus
You will have more than you can hold
There is much more love than you know
We'll dance and we'll sing
and we'll taste everything
Be with me
V2
Holding back
watching and waiting
Always on the outside
Pressure inside
passion takes flight
Now is the time to fly
Chorus
Bridge
You are strong
I've watched you before
Take you place
you belong
Chorus
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