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I am working on writing some tracks for a band I am also working on starting. I play bass and guitar on this demo and started to play some vocal melody ideas with the guitar over it. The drums are GarageBand loops. Bonus bass solo!
Overall structure / instrumentation, ideas for vocal melodies
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The instrumentation moves the song along extremely well! It seems to have a really solid structure. Like the nice little bass solo. The only thing you may want to watch out for as you add lyrics is making sure the turnarounds and verses aren’t too long (there may be one or two places you can take out a 16-count), but that’ll get ironed out later. Can’t wait to hear some updates!
June 04, 2013
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Caryn Womack
The instrumentation moves the song along extremely well! It seems to have a really solid structure. Like the nice little bass solo. The only thing you may want to watch out for as you add lyrics is making sure the turnarounds and verses aren’t too long (there may be one or two places you can take out a 16-count), but that’ll get ironed out later. Can’t wait to hear some updates!
June 04, 2013
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