Easy listening
Unfinished…something I’m thinking about, working on…just posting it as is for now for some odd reason
Not a typical song for me…very different
Possible sync song once it’s done
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I heard the music
A guitarist play
Not knowing
What happened
You were there
But went away
Warm water, chest high
Hot, still night
Full moon so bright
White cactus blooms
Shared our holy night
Eyes closed, I felt you
You took my hands
Gentleness abound
“I love you” whispered
Your breath and lips
Touched my mouth
Floating, spinning round
You thought you lost
Me forever
Praying I’d find out
The risk you’d take
To show me
All you do for me
So much thought
You’d patiently wait
Like chess moves
You set up a play
Making memories
I’d know someday
Warm water, chest high
Hot, still night
Full moon so bright
White cactus blooms
Shared our holy night
Eyes closed, I felt you
And you took my hands
Gentleness abound
“I love you” whispered
Your breath and lips
Touched my mouth
Floating, spinning round
Floating, spinning, my
head feeling thatway
My heart is yours
Your touch stayed
It was enough
And for you, I wait
Love has its way.
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Casey Johnson
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November 01, 2026
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