Lyricist And Music Producer: Hamidreza Ghorbani
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I still remember that September
Your eyes, your smile, the night we met
The years have passed, but I remember
You're the one I can't forget
I've tried to leave our past Night
I've tried to love a thousand times
But every road, and every face
Still leads me back to your embrace
No one took your place in my heart
No one could, right from the start
I've loved and lost, I've tried to move on
But you're the one I'm still holding on
You're my first love, my sweetest pain
I'd choose you over and over again
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DeeDee B
“My sweetest pain” is a great description.
October 26, 2026
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