Playing around with the thought that one day AI might be able to read our minds.
Go for it
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Dear A.I.,
I’m giving you all you need,
the good and the ugly ,
the man that I think I am
and the one I hope to be,
All my stresses and workday messes,
the flaws I carry and
the ones I try to beat,
yeah, that pretty much sums up me.
There’s so much Ive never said,
So much I can’t explain.
She wants to be a mother ,
And build a life
we’d both claim.
But I want you, dear A.I.,
To read all the thoughts of mine ,
Then please tell me honestly
Is she the right one for me?
Is it normal if she doesn’t
text me back
Right away?
Am I actually in love or
is this just a silly crush
in
a cheesy bumper sticker way?
hooked myself to a machine
and now I feel ashamed,
I love her deeply enough tho
Im hoping she’ll feel the same
All my doubts and quiet shouts,
the man I am with nobody around
the debts I hide, my job uncertainty
Along with her feelings for me
There’s so much Ive never said,
So much I can’t explain.
She wants to be a mother
And build a life we’d both claim.
But I want you, dear A.I.,
To read all the thoughts of mine ,
Then please tell me honestly
Is she the right one for me?
A.I.,is she the one for me ?
A.I., is she the one for me?
A.I. A.I. A.I. A.I.
How do I know
if she’s the right one
for me ?
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This was a fun listen. You use a lot of words, I had to listen close. lol It has a very care free feel, very pleasant melody. I enjoyed this a lot. Great job Robert!
October 18, 2026
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Michael Gibbs
This was a fun listen. You use a lot of words, I had to listen close. lol It has a very care free feel, very pleasant melody. I enjoyed this a lot. Great job Robert!
October 18, 2026
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