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As a mom raising kids just wishes for a break and can't wait...one day she'll miss Packing His Lunch
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[Verse 1]
Cut off the crust
So he’ll eat his lunch
Forgot his juice box in the fridge
Nearly misses the bus
[Verse 2]
Then you look at the clock
How’d the day get away?
Time to get him to practice
It’s the daily game you play
[Pre-Chorus 1]
You laugh with friends 'bout needin’ a break
Gettin' him on his own
How you can’t wait...
[Chorus]
Then you get what you wished for
One day he’s all grown
The quiet gets lonely
Sittin' home all alone
Slow down and remember
Embarrass him with hugs
Before you know it
You’ll miss packin’ his lunch
[Verse 3]
Hand him the car keys
Now he’s never around
Too busy workin’
Or just cruisin' through town
[Verse 4]
He graduates
Havin' the time of his life
You cook too much dinner
Just in case he stops by
[Pre-Chorus 2]
Someday, that girl’s all he’ll talk about
And deep down you know
What he’s just found…
[Chorus]
Then you get what you wished for
One day he’s all grown
The quiet gets lonely
Sittin' home all alone
Slow down and remember
Embarrass him with hugs
Before you know it
You’ll miss packin’ his lunch
[Outro]
Yeah, slow down and remember...
Embarrass him with hugs...
Before you know it...
You’ll miss packin’ his lunch.
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