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My Daughter told me the kind of music she was listening to, so I did some reading and tried to put this is the pov of young angsty relationship. I use Suno A.I. to create demos for the lyrics I write, prompting the style that I want and I try to get it as specific as I can to get it to sound the way I want it to.
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[Verse 1]
"Are you Okay?"
You always say you’re fine
I have to wonder
If you still like being mine
I’ll go to sleep now
Will morning make us new?
I’m young enough to make mistakes
And still be in love with you
[Chorus]
When you start feeling lonely
Before we’re just a memory
I would prefer it
If you wouldn’t lie to me
I didn’t take you off your games
I didn’t take you from the net
You spend all your time with me
So I ask, “are you tired of me, yet?"
[Verse 2: Clairo]
I am not your wife
You don’t have to lie
just say your going away
You can tell me goodbye
I’m askin how you’re feelin
You haven’t told me yet
If you’re gonna run away
Just tell me, are you tired of me yet.
[Chorus]
When you start feeling lonely
Before we’re just a memory
I would prefer it
If you wouldn’t lie to me
I didn’t take you off your games
I didn’t take you from the net
You spend all your time with me
So I ask, “are you tired of me, yet?"
[bridge]
Not too old
Never bold
You leave your feelings untold
You’re with me
You’re not with me
Here’s your out … I’m setting you free!
[outro]
When you start feeling lonely
Before we’re just a memory
I would prefer it
If you wouldn’t lie to me
I didn’t take you off your games
I didn’t take you from the net
You spend all your time with me
So I ask, “are you tired of me, yet?"
Just tell me …
Are you tired of me yet?
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