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It takes place in Watsonville, CA. I see it as the beginning to a musical but lots to figure out.
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She had cocoa eyes
and a perfect nose
and curly brown hair
She wrote passionate prose
We spent many a night
high as a kite
I’ll always remember that girl
We held hands all the time
‘round our hometown
She looked sweet in a skirt
and in an evening gown
We had so much fun
We were a hole in one
I’ll always remember that girl
The times we had out at Kelly Lake
Kept me centered in a world gone insane
Every year she baked me an orange cake
Her favorite way to travel was by train
She had a tender smile
One that haunts my dreams
She knew all of my plans
And my secret schemes
She vanished one day
Now all I can say
is I’ll always remember that girl
I’ll always remember that girl
Music Arrangement by Suno.
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