alt-rock song about slowing down, letting go, and choosing your own pace.
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Verse1
Wasting my time as a passer by
Waiting on a lane to become free
Then taking what’s mine after all this time
I think that would be something to see
Casting my cares somewhere over there
Keeping them just out of reach
And I’m taking my time Cause' I know they’re still mine
They’re just too heavy to carry with me
Chorus
So, keep on the tight lip
Watch out that you don’t slip
That don’t sound crazy to me
We can be lazy for free
That way comes easy to me
Come on go crazy with me
It’s a short trip
Verse2
Tracing the lines of a borrowed sky
Looking for a sign that was meant for me
Chasing a sound that I still haven’t found
In the spaces that are left between
Building my dreams to burst at the seams
Somewhere between faith and belief
I’m learning I find what I left behind
Is a weight that only burdened me
Chorus
So, keep on the tight lip
Watch out that you don’t slip
That don’t sound crazy to me
We can be lazy for free
That way comes easy to me
Come on go crazy with me
It’s a short trip
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Robert Boog
I like the energy and rock vibe.
November 23, 2025
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