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Song about a guy who is in love with his best friends girl. The cruelty is in the last verse.
The good news, "At least you'll always have what might have been" The bad news, "All your life you'll dream what might have been"
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Hi again ( I responded to your last post) and again, thanks. I liked the movie. Some parts more than others. Unrequited love has always affected me. After seeing this character in the movie, the song just came out. I can see how you might want to go back to the chorus, especially if you liked it, but after the last verse, I didn’t see the point of it. Like I said in my other post, I will be going back to your page to comment on your stuff which is all quite good
February 01, 2025
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WHAT DO YOU DO..WHAT DO YOU SAY
SHE LOOKS AT YOU, YOU TURN AWAY
SEEING HER WITH HIM AGAIN
ONLY MAKES IT WORSE..
SHE'S WITH A FRIEND THAT YOU COULD NEVER HURT..
THINK OF HER SMILE..WHEN YOU FIRST MET
THE WAY THAT SHE LAUGHS, YOU'LL NEVER FORGET
EVERYTHING YOU EVER WANT, IS WRITTEN IN HER EYES
SHE'LL NEVER KNOW THE FEELINGS THAT YOU
HIDE NOW...YOU CRY NOW... SHE'LL NEVER KNOW THE TRUTH
ALL THIS TIME SHE SHOULD HAVE BEEN WITH YOU..
LIFE WILL GO ON..SO WILL THE PAIN
THAT KIND OF LOVE ALWAYS REMAINS
AFTER ALL THE TEARS THAT FALL, YOU'LL THINK OF HER AGAIN..
AT LEAST YOU'LL ALWAYS HAVE WHAT MIGHT HAVE BEEN...
ALL YOUR LIFE YOU'LL DREAM WHAT MIGHT HAVE BEEN
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Hey Greg,
Great song. Very emotional. I really loved it. My only complaint is that after the last verse you couldn’t circle back to the…“Hide now, you cry now” part. To me, melodically it was the most beautiful part of the song. I wish you all the best with it. Quite good.
January 31, 2025
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Hi again ( I responded to your last post) and again, thanks. I liked the movie. Some parts more than others. Unrequited love has always affected me. After seeing this character in the movie, the song just came out. I can see how you might want to go back to the chorus, especially if you liked it, but after the last verse, I didn’t see the point of it. Like I said in my other post, I will be going back to your page to comment on your stuff which is all quite good
February 01, 2025
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Hey Greg,
Great song. Very emotional. I really loved it. My only complaint is that after the last verse you couldn’t circle back to the…“Hide now, you cry now” part. To me, melodically it was the most beautiful part of the song. I wish you all the best with it. Quite good.
January 31, 2025
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