Everyone falls (fails) it's part of life. Each person will have a different way of dealing with it. This is mine...last verse sums it up
Saw a funny bumper sticker (follow along) "Don't honk...I'll cry"... I'm not THAT sensitive. It's just a pretty song with a nice message. Not preaching, just spreading a little kindness
Hey, thanks. I went to your page. You are stupidly prolific!! (emphasis on “prolific” not “stupidly”) Your production skill are also great. Sounds as good as anything I hear on the radio. I will go back to your site and comment on some of your songs which are all quite good!
February 01, 2025
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- WHAT DO YOU DO WHEN YOU FALL -
What do you do when you fall?...How many scars will it make
Banging your head on the wall...Wondering how much you can take
Are you willing to break all the rules? Are you willing to just play the fool...
What do you do when you fall...in love
What do you do when he calls? Maybe you'll just let it ring..
Staring alone at the walls....No one can know what it brings..
Do you just shake it off with a frown..Do you fall on your knees and break down...
What do you do when you fall in love...
LEAD.....Do you just turn around and give up
Tell your heart that you've just had enough..
What do you do when you fall...in love
Love everyone that you can..wipe away all of their debts
Pray for the ones that you can't...Try to forgive all the rest
Always give more than you take..With all the love that you make
That's what you do when you fall...in love...that's what you do when you fall.....
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Great song Greg. Reminds me of a couple of the Eagles songs I’ve been listening to lately. Nice vibe. I really enjoyed it. Good luck with this one.
January 31, 2025
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Hey, thanks. I went to your page. You are stupidly prolific!! (emphasis on “prolific” not “stupidly”) Your production skill are also great. Sounds as good as anything I hear on the radio. I will go back to your site and comment on some of your songs which are all quite good!
February 01, 2025
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Allan Rosensweig
Great song Greg. Reminds me of a couple of the Eagles songs I’ve been listening to lately. Nice vibe. I really enjoyed it. Good luck with this one.
January 31, 2025
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