This is the third song I have ever co-wrote. It is a scratch vocal and not perfect. Someday, I will hire a vocalist and clean it up.
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Anything
Lyrics and Melody by Jennifer Katusha
Music by Jeff Oxford
A walk on the beach
A mountain peak
An autumn leaf falling down
My father’s hands
A newborn lamb
Long auburn strands blowin’ round
If you took all of my favorite things
And you wrapped them up
They would not hold a candle to you
Or to your love
Chorus
When you're crying I’ll make you laugh
And when you’re laughing I’ll join right in
When you scream I can’t do this again
I’ll tell you yes you can
So when you need me I’ll be there
Dial my number and let it ring
I’ll listen for as long as it takes
For you
I’d do anything
A sky of blue
Telling the truth
A dog or two for company
Christmas Eve
A trick up my sleeve
The minor keys to make me feel
If you took all of my favorite things
And you wrapped them up
They would not hold a candle to you
Or to your love
Chorus
When you're crying I’ll make you laugh
And when you’re laughing I’ll join right in
When you scream I can’t do this again
I’ll tell you yes you can
So when you need me I’ll be there
Dial my number and let it ring
I’ll listen for as long as it takes
For you
I’d do anything
Waking to birdsong
Feeling like I belong
A child’s picture hand-drawn just for me
A chalk-white birch tree
The buzz of a bumble bee
The way you see… me
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