I was getting serious about a guy and thought he was too until he flirted with another girl in front of me and my friends. I felt betrayed and told him it was over. That day changed our relationship. We just celebrated our 50th anniversary this year.
I don't play guitar but have always thought this would sound better with a guitar accompaniment. Would enjoy hearing if anyone else has thoughts as to how it could be improved.
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Verse 1
Rumors going round someone else you've found
That you have lost your senses though your mind is sound
Take your time figure it out but you can't stay
I won't wait while you do
Chorus
Don't you talk Don't you plead
Don't want to be your fool if you don't love me
Don't you talk Don't you plead
Don't want to hear you still care because I'm setting you free
Don't you talk Don't you plead Just get out
Leave and let me be
Verse 2
Don't care how it started who did what or when
You've hurt my pride too much so let's just let it end
So if you're with her now
Don't let the door hit you on your way out
Chorus
Don't you talk Don't you plead
Don't want to be your fool if you don't love me
Don't you talk Don't you plead
Don't want to hear you still care because I'm setting you free
Don't you talk Don't you plead Just get out
Leave and let me be
Musical interlude
Don't you talk don't you plead who you're with won't be me
Don't you talk don't you plead who you're with won't be me
Don't you talk
Don't you plead
Don't you talk don't you plead just get out let me be
Don't you talk
Don't you plead
Don't you talk don't you plead just get out let me be
Don't you talk don't you plead just get out let me be
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