My first attempt at blues. Since I only play pen and paper, I use my original hand crafted lyrics and then set them to AI generated melodies and vocals. Always my own original lyrics though. Good or bad—-they are mine.
Any constructive feedback is always welcome. I am here to grow.
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rr 2022
You dirty dog, lyin’, cheat’n , son of a gun
dirty dog lyin, cheat’n, son of a gun
You think I don't know
I'm not your only one
You've been tryin to hide stuff
a blind man could see
Fool you gotta know
there's no upgrade from me
You lay down with dogs
Gonna get up scratch’n fleas
I asked around’n heard
that girl is full of disease
You'll be paying doctor bills
the rest of your life
Im servin’ up your papers
So long sucker
Good bye
You dirty dog, lyin’, cheat’n , son of a gun
Dirty dog, lyin, cheat’n, son of a gun
You think I don't know
I'm not your only one
You dirty dog, lyin, cheatin son of a gun
You've been tryin to hide stuff
a blind man could see
Fool you gotta know
there's no upgrade from me
No doubt
No doubt
You dirty dog, lyin’, cheat’n , son of a gun
…..dirty dog, lying, cheating, son of a gun
Fool you gotta know there's no upgrade from me
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