I wrote this song about having gone through a hard time and wanting to finally not be afraid and run wild with the dreams and the life that God had placed on my heart.
I am always open to any kind of feedback on my music. What do you think? 
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Run Wild (3:35)
(Verse 1)
Down so low, you forgot where you belong
So I’m here to remind you
Those sticks and stones
Is an old song so why you letting them hurt you?
Go take a good look in the mirror
I don’t know if I can say this much clearer
Even broken pieces still shine
So stop hiding cause this is your time
(Chorus)
So run, run wild
Let them horses run girl you’ve only just begun
And don’t look back
You out shine ‘em all yeah just like that red sunset
Let your heart lead the way
Feel the power ‘neath your feet
So don’t be tamed
No don’t be shy
And Run wild
(Verse 2)
You’ve been fenced
Now for too long, got you running in circles
Oh why is it always
The strong ones that get pushed down the hardest?
They tried to break you but they couldn’t
They thought you’d bend but you wouldn’t
Wide open spaces are calling
So that fence ‘round you it don’t mean a thing
(Bridge)
There’s a fire in your eyes
Don’t you let’em put it out
You gotta leave’em in the dust
Cause walking through this world it ain’t no fun
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Hi Jennifer.
I do like the song but just one thing kind of bugs me. And I know that you probably wrote it that way but there is no change in the chord structure of the song (except for a part in the bridge). It resonates around F#m & A correct? I am not a pro but it might have been nice change it up a bit in the chorus? Again, if that’s the way you wanted the song to sound, not a bad thing. I am just giving you that from my listening ears. It sounds like maybe something that would work well as a sync piece possibly? (Your voice is killer by the way).
July 03, 2024
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Dan Warren
Hi Jennifer.
I do like the song but just one thing kind of bugs me. And I know that you probably wrote it that way but there is no change in the chord structure of the song (except for a part in the bridge). It resonates around F#m & A correct? I am not a pro but it might have been nice change it up a bit in the chorus? Again, if that’s the way you wanted the song to sound, not a bad thing. I am just giving you that from my listening ears. It sounds like maybe something that would work well as a sync piece possibly? (Your voice is killer by the way).
July 03, 2024
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