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Part 2

ben krahne

March 17, 2024

Genre: Blues

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Joe Berry

Talking about some good blues

March 26, 2024

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He digs with his wings rips open scars
Like a dark ghost in a spooky graveyard
His needle claws ensnare me in a trap
And release the hidden demons of my past
When I sleep fear hurts my weary eyes
And I pray for a quick sunrise
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The crow flies over his nightly playground
Like an ebony arrow making a hissing sound
He's A NEVER ENDING nightmare
Coal eyes with a cold blank stare
He haunts my heart and soul
LIKE A BIRD BY EDGAR ALLAN POE
That nocturnal CURSE the crow
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Caw! Caw! Hear his blood shrieking cry
See his silhouette in the moonlit sky
He casts a spell of sheer misery
I can’t hide from his trickery
He’s got black magic evil voodoo
Stronger than any witches brew
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The crow flies over his nightly playground
Like an ebony arrow making a hissing sound
He's A NEVER ENDING nightmare
Coal eyes with a cold blank stare
God Bless the morning
He’s gone
In his place a white dove
And a lovely dawn

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Joe Berry

Talking about some good blues

March 26, 2024


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