This song was born out heartbreak, as most songs are. It is honestly, truth, and that is all. No gimmicks or word frills and trills its just raw emotion. So i hope you guys enjoy!!
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Done with love
I gave you my love
Then you threw it away
I gave you my love
Then you threw it away
I told you that I
Was here to stay
I told you that I
was here to stay, was here to stay
I'm done with love
My hearts been pushed around
It's been beaten down
I'm done with love
That was the past
And this is now
Done with love
When you said that four letter word
LOVE LOVE
When you said that four letter word
You lied to me, you lied to me
When you said that four letter word
LOVE LOVE
When you said that four letter word
You lied to me, you lied to me
I'm done with love
My hearts been pushed around
It's been beaten down
I'm done with love
That was the past
And this is now
Done with love
She says baby won't you stay
I need you, I need you
She says baby won't you stay
And I say it's too late
I'm done with love
My hearts been pushed around
It's been beaten down
I'm done with love
That was the past
And this is now
Done with love
Done with love.....
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I liked this a lot - great vocals! Not sure if this arrangement was meant to be a rough-out or not - but as a finished product I’d kind of like to hear bass and drums and maybe a piano come in at the start the of 2nd verse and maybe continue throughout with a pause of them at the “she says” part and then come back in when you go back to “I’m done with love” but your delivery on this so far is great - I like the relentless nature of this song a lot and you’ve got a great voice - good job!
March 06, 2014
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Don Nelson
I liked this a lot - great vocals! Not sure if this arrangement was meant to be a rough-out or not - but as a finished product I’d kind of like to hear bass and drums and maybe a piano come in at the start the of 2nd verse and maybe continue throughout with a pause of them at the “she says” part and then come back in when you go back to “I’m done with love” but your delivery on this so far is great - I like the relentless nature of this song a lot and you’ve got a great voice - good job!
March 06, 2014
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