My family. My heartbeat. Love, hurt, healing, my backyard, dogs, and the fact I can't play guitar. The instrumental shines 80s and it lands on the perfect starry night with the love of my life. The ocean, my unborn daughter's heartbeat, all there.
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This Fine Night
Well the time is short but the night is long
Hangin' with my queen on the backyard lawn..she's perfect
She laughs at all of my stupid jokes
And fills my world with so much hope..she's patient with me
I don't think I've known the perfect day
But this night tells me that it is
I'm still well and the little girl who calls me daddy whispers in my ear "You're awkward, daddy”.
V2
I wish that I could play guitar
But man it's work and just so hard..don't matter
The dogs go chasing that gray squirrel
Near the miss it shakes its tail and chatters
Time has settled almost every score
Been the healing from the times of war
Tears have fallen till it hurt no more and I'm alive again and free...
V3
Golden light and twinkled stars
Shine from Heavens near and far I'm breathing
I might have a wish or two
But nothing in the end that I am needing
Faith and hope are the laughter of my girls
Colors beautiful and true
This fine night is the fire and the silver of the moon I share with you…with you.
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David Pellegrini
Really like your song.
September 10, 2023
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