I wrote this last year and did a male and female version. I decided to take a 3rd take and do a duet.
Any comments welcome, good or bad.
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Verse 1
One Kiss, One Heart
Is all I’m asking of you
Can’t be, That hard
To find the one love that’s true
Chorus
So, use your last remaining arrow
Take your shot, let it fly
Hit your mark, make this one special
Cupids last arrow tonight
Verse 2
Two hearts, Last kiss
Is all that I’m waiting for
Last try, Don’t miss
Make it a heart that is pure
Bridge
I’ve been waiting such a long long time
Waiting for a heart like mine
Chorus
So, use your last remaining arrow
Take your shot, let it fly
Hit your mark, make this one special
Cupids last arrow tonight
Chorus
So, use your last remaining arrow
Take your shot, let it fly
Hit your mark, make this one special
Cupids last arrow tonight
Tag
Hit your mark, make this one special
As Cupids last arrow takes flight
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Hi Dave,
The musical arrangement is pretty powerful and the melody with harmonies is really tasteful. The only feedback that I’d give would be to provide a few more details about the individuals in the verses or more content about how cupid goes about shooting the arrow ranging from stance to nock to draw. It’s a good song!
Thanks, Brent
July 25, 2023
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Uncle Brent ...
Hi Dave,
The musical arrangement is pretty powerful and the melody with harmonies is really tasteful. The only feedback that I’d give would be to provide a few more details about the individuals in the verses or more content about how cupid goes about shooting the arrow ranging from stance to nock to draw. It’s a good song!
Thanks, Brent
July 25, 2023
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