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Simple Life

Robert Walker

July 10, 2023

Genre: Country

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Upbeat song about living the average life of a blue collar working person

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scott walker

Robert- I’ve never given any feedback and I’m not a great songwriter so take all this with a grain of salt!

My opinion is its a Great song- Tempo and Melody imma feeling -Verses are fire….I could see that ole buck chasing that doe in my mind and I shot em lol. Great start to this song. Second verse I feel the same way - just awesome. The title is perfect in my opinion. I love everything about the Chorus - those first two lines are my fav part of this song but something hits different when it reaches “With my baby beside me watching the stars for hours” not sure what it really is but first time hearing it - it seemed not to flow like rest of song. After listening over and over it started growing on me but maybe a change right there but I don’t really know…..sounds like something i would listen to or on the radio so I say you got something here. Just my opinon

April 12, 2024

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I drink my coffee, on the back porch
Watching the sun come up
While a doe runs, through the pasture
chased by an 8 point buck

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All I need is some tailgate sittin
Sweet tea drinking and guitar picking
In the backyard around an old bonfire
With my baby beside me watching stars for hours
I work hard and I live a simple life.

Sunday mornings, talkin to Jesus
On the back of my beat up truck
Or Daddy's bass boat, out on the water
and living life, and that's enough.


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All I need is some tailgate sittin
Sweet tea drinking and guitar picking
In the backyard around an old bonfire
With my baby beside me watching stars for hours
I work hard and I live a simple life.

Nothing wrong, with having a good time
Enjoying the little things
Like a ball game, and some good friends
Cold Beer and chicken wings


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All I need is some tailgate sittin
Sweet tea drinking and guitar picking
In the backyard around an old bonfire
With my baby beside me watching stars for hours
I work hard and I live a simple life.
I work hard and I live a simple life.

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scott walker

Robert- I’ve never given any feedback and I’m not a great songwriter so take all this with a grain of salt!

My opinion is its a Great song- Tempo and Melody imma feeling -Verses are fire….I could see that ole buck chasing that doe in my mind and I shot em lol. Great start to this song. Second verse I feel the same way - just awesome. The title is perfect in my opinion. I love everything about the Chorus - those first two lines are my fav part of this song but something hits different when it reaches “With my baby beside me watching the stars for hours” not sure what it really is but first time hearing it - it seemed not to flow like rest of song. After listening over and over it started growing on me but maybe a change right there but I don’t really know…..sounds like something i would listen to or on the radio so I say you got something here. Just my opinon

April 12, 2024


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