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Kathy great love song. Opposites attract they say. It’s Funny too, good contrast lyrics. Nice production .
Just some suggestions. I might shorten it up take out the middle section or part of it. maybe a line like how can we( both )be so wrong and yet were so right must be love cause I love you and you me. something like that. shut your mouth. line I think I understand what your saying. maybe find another more humorous way to say that. I go north you go south
never find common ground. , Maybe something like they rate us on the scale of harmony/ or we are rated on scale of harmony. Great song. Hope that helps.
August 19, 2023
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David Pellegrini
Kathy great love song. Opposites attract they say. It’s Funny too, good contrast lyrics. Nice production .
Just some suggestions. I might shorten it up take out the middle section or part of it. maybe a line like how can we( both )be so wrong and yet were so right must be love cause I love you and you me. something like that. shut your mouth. line I think I understand what your saying. maybe find another more humorous way to say that. I go north you go south
never find common ground. , Maybe something like they rate us on the scale of harmony/ or we are rated on scale of harmony. Great song. Hope that helps.
August 19, 2023
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