I was thinking of the movie Maverick.
This is a raw version, I would like any feedback before I get the full demo.
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Marketa Black
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Marketa Black
11/24/2022
v1
I see the light at the end of the tunnel
Oh Lord I think it's a train.
I feel the ground start to rumble
Most folks would be in flames
But I was born a gambler,
and luck is on my side,
I see it coming faster
I'm gonna hop that freight and ride.
chorus
I was born for chances
I bet against the odds
Deal the cards
and I'll make my best hand
I don't think about lifes troubles
I dont worry about going bust
that's why they cal me
call me Lady Luck
Verse2
Midnight and I'm gambling on the river
and The reels are spinning
I got 5's the stakes are high
Crowd gather around I'm winning
A yell came from the wheel house
as we hit a barge,
and I landed in the water,
with a carpetbag full of money
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I was born for chances
I bet against the odds
Deal the cards
and I'll make my best hand
I don't think about lifes troubles
I dont worry about going bust
that's why they cal me
call me Lady Luck
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