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This hymn starts with a question: can you hear me? I'm calling and singing to you, but I need assurance that I'm getting through. The singer shouts even more to God. He adores it. And finally, the singer is certain that Jesus hears him.
This is a demo that took a surprisingly Gospel direction with the singer I hired. Let me know your feedback if that style works, if the lyrics engage you, and where the arrangement can improve.
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Verse 1
Jesus, can you hear me
As I sing your song today?
Hear my words declaring
All your wonders and your praise.
When I call your name how my heart fills up
With joy flowing from your grace
You chose this soul to receive new life
Now I stand here still amazed!
Jesus, can you hear me
As I sing your song today?
Verse 2
Jesus, can you see me
As I walk the narrow way
Longing for your beauty
As I look to see your face
When I look above and I see dark clouds
Looming over earth below
I cheer my heart with your promises
They are all I need to know
Jesus, can you see me
As I walk the narrow way
Bridge
Shout, my soul, to your God on high!
He adores your love and praise
Overflow with adoring cries
Lavish him with all you say
Verse 3
Jesus, how I hear you
As you speak into my heart
Soothing words that rescue
And they've done so from the start
You endured the storm that secured my life
Bearing all my guilt and shame
Now you sit at the Father's throne
There I'll see you face to face
Jesus, how I hear you
As you speak into my heart
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