She's a real pain in the !@@#$ but Man she's just so Damn pretty!
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Hey Kevin, My feelings for what it’s worth. Overall great song. I thought the lyrics were a little wordy in places, especially in the bridge. I think you should go with a short bridge and then back to your catchy chorus (Pretty Baby you’re so damn pretty…) Lyrics could be cleaned up in places. Great playing and singing.
May 20, 2022
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Allan Rosensweig
Hey Kevin, My feelings for what it’s worth. Overall great song. I thought the lyrics were a little wordy in places, especially in the bridge. I think you should go with a short bridge and then back to your catchy chorus (Pretty Baby you’re so damn pretty…) Lyrics could be cleaned up in places. Great playing and singing.
May 20, 2022
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