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Honestly the chorus came to me while I was venting off my thoughts, and I built the rest of the song around it. It is only lyrics, and I apologize for my voice in the recording I have a slight head cold in it. Just lyrics, no backing track or music.
Any feedback is welcome, good or bad. Though thoughts on the Lyrics and how I could improve would be the most wanted.
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In this dungeon of my own design
I sit and think on all I've left behind
But soon my thoughts fall into disarray
And all the hurts start to ricochet
All their insults and their angry words
Start bombarding me like pissed off birds
And as they join into a deafening choir
All my senses start to go haywire
And the voices in my head are clamoring clamoring
The days slip by and I'm sick of it sick of it
I can't escape and it's killing me killing me
When will I be free?
And the voices in my head are clamoring clamoring
The days slip by and I'm sick of it sick of it
I can't escape and it's killing me killing me
Is anybody listening!
I wake up and I'm feeling numb
All my emotions have succumbed
To everything they've been telling me
My mind has scattered like debris
Now I lie here and I don't know why
It doesn't matter how hard I try
It's like I've broken some taboo
And now I feel knocked askew
And the voices in my head are clamoring clamoring
The days slip by and I'm sick of it sick of it
I can't escape and it's killing me killing me
When will I be free?
And the voices in my head are clamoring clamoring
The days slip by and I'm sick of it sick of it
I can't escape and it's killing me killing me
Is anybody listening!
Everyday has become so routine
I barely feel the pain and misery
All their hate and dishonesty
Always playing on repeat
The thoughts bouncing around in my head
Make me wish I could hit reset
Go back to a time when things where better
But they follow me around like a vengeful specter
And I keep fighting it fighting it
But I'm afraid to admit to admit
That I'm losing my grip losing my grip
This will be my crypt
And I keep fighting it fighting it
But I'm afraid to admit to admit
That I'm losing my grip losing my grip
I want to quit!
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