Simple song about a guy who realizes he was taken advantage of in the past.
It's pretty much a work tape, so a focus on overall lyric and song structure would be great! Don't get too bogged down in my productions skills!
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Written with Jeff Walter
Your c’mon drawl
And those midnight calls
Were the poison, I was cravin'
We'd drink on your roof
Lit up like the moon
Till your loneliness was sated
I was 18, I was dumb, I was in love
I was your plaything, but darlin' I grew up
You knew me then
Like the back of your own hand
You knew me when
Your whim was my command
But I ain't the same fool used to follow you around
you don't know me now
I can’t believe
You’re callin’ me
At midnight and we haven’t spoke in years
I’d love to talk
Maybe take a walk
Find a corner bar and have some beers
If you’re lonely and hopin’ for a one night stand
Hang up the phone, this won’t go like you’ve planned
Chorus
Now I’m somewhat wiser than I used to be
I’m not that love-struck sucker anymore
But given time, girl, you just might get used to me
If a real man’s what you’re looking for
Chorus
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