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This is my latest single from the "Afterlife Glow" EP, which features more new songs written during quarantine/lockdown. The theme of the EP is rediscovering life and love after crisis.
I would love to hear and genuinely appreciate any thoughts/feedback at all about the song. Songwriting is my passion. I have written over 25 new songs since the start of the pandemic.
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Never picked a rose that didn't wither,
Never seen a star that didn't shine,
Never touched a willow that didn't shiver in the wintertime,
Never seen the edge of the water when the moon was at its height
Never seen a young bird take its maiden flight
Never seen two wrongs ever make it right
That I have seen the road
And I have seen pines
Seen swinging doors
where the ripple wine
flows like rivers, like blood red rivers
Every autumn leaf has to fall but every tree still stands tall when the wind blows
...I have seen rain falling in sheets,
I have seen nights where the darkness weeps
And I have seen yesterdays falling on yesterdays.
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Great song. definitely have a knack for great lyrics and emotion.
November 07, 2021
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Allan Rosensweig
Great song. definitely have a knack for great lyrics and emotion.
November 07, 2021
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