I wrote this song after seeing the commercial. The twist is obvious. Not demoed yet, sung a'capella.
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I've Fallen (And I Don't Wanna Get Up)
Verse
Of all the lonely people, I was lonely as they come
Never thought that I would ever find me someone
But, when you least expect it, love takes you by surprise
And darlin' that's what happened when I looked into your eyes...
Chorus
I've fallen and I don't wanna get up
I've fallen head-over-heels in love
When you wrap your arms around me, I ain't callin' 911
'Cause I've fallen and I don't wanna get up
Verse
It's been a month of Sundays since I held a woman tight
Now the drought is over and I'm seein' you tonight
My hands are shakin', my knees are weak like a kid on his first date
Nothin's gonna stop me now, my mind's already made...
Chorus
Bridge
Maybe I'd cry out for help, if I thought you'd let me go
But, ever since the day I fell, I gotta let you know...
Chorus
Tag
I've fallen and I don't wanna get up
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