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Relationship with the mother of my 2 children continues to hit brick wall after brick wall. Fighting for every inch of common ground, reversing course when the fights commence, I have tried everything in my power take us further and it always fails.
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Thank you for the feedback! I wish I could add vocals myself but unfortunately, I have never really had a knack for it and I know it’s not my strong suit. I am definitely open to anybody with that ability (or simply the courage) to track vocals over the instrumental as a collaboration.
August 31, 2021
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Hey Jason,
Great tension at the beginning to set the feel then build to the heavier part. This is cool ... Are you going to add vocals? Also, the situation can be tough but it’s these difficulties that lead us to heart felt songs. Nice job! Thanks, Brent
August 31, 2021
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Thank you for the feedback! I wish I could add vocals myself but unfortunately, I have never really had a knack for it and I know it’s not my strong suit. I am definitely open to anybody with that ability (or simply the courage) to track vocals over the instrumental as a collaboration.
August 31, 2021
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Hey Jason,
Great tension at the beginning to set the feel then build to the heavier part. This is cool ... Are you going to add vocals? Also, the situation can be tough but it’s these difficulties that lead us to heart felt songs. Nice job! Thanks, Brent
August 31, 2021
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