great song tim… love the simplicity of the track and vocally a great melody! thanks for posting!
June 16, 2021
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She’s dirt tired
been a long long hard day
She gets home
I put that record on
It’s playin ain't no sunshine when she’s gone
It’s her favorite song
We spin it all night long
We’re rocking that porch swing, feet up high
California sun way up in the sky
Drinkin’ red red wine
Everything’s just fine
Getting lost in a day dream, middle of the night,
paradise. Not a soul sight
just her and me.
No place I’d rather be
Just chillin, feet off the ground
Just chillin, got our head in the clouds
Oh I love this feeling, just chillin
We float away far from that river bank
Hand in hand. I love to watch you tan
Thinkin’ bout you all day long
I knew this moment would come
Gonna let it all fade as we drift away
And keep rocking that porch swing, feet up high
California sun way up in the sky
Drinkin’ red red wine
Everything’s just fine
Getting lost in a day dream, middle of the night,
paradise. Not a soul sight
just her and me.
No place I’d rather be
Just chillin
Keep rockin that porch swing, feet up high
Drinkin’ red red wine
Getting lost in a day dream, middle of the night,
paradise. Not a soul sight
just her and me.
No place I’d rather be
Just chillin feet off the ground
Just chillin, got our head in the clouds
Oh I love this feeling, just chillin
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Nice intro and great vocals. Very cool arrangement adding the steel and keys! If you do a full band version, have the beat drop at the end of the first chorus. My favorite line is “I put that record on It’s playin ain’t no sunshine when she’s gone It’s her favorite song We spin it all night long.” Thanks, Brent
June 11, 2021
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great song tim… love the simplicity of the track and vocally a great melody! thanks for posting!
June 16, 2021
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Uncle Brent ...
Nice intro and great vocals. Very cool arrangement adding the steel and keys! If you do a full band version, have the beat drop at the end of the first chorus. My favorite line is “I put that record on It’s playin ain’t no sunshine when she’s gone It’s her favorite song We spin it all night long.” Thanks, Brent
June 11, 2021
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