This song is about constantly wearing your heart on your sleeve and always getting hurt but you take chances with it anyway!
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Thank you for the feedback. There were two things going on when I started this song. I had the basic track down, using loops from my phone. Then I also had the title. I took the title and brainstormed it using clustering. eventually the song hashed itself out and I wrote the lyric and thaen sang to it.
April 23, 2021
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as the crow flies
I'm 3 miles from your home
my danger zone
I've got a bad trait
with heartache
tired lines
and neon signs
I'm looking for a meant to be
some kind of destiny for me
I keep taking chances with my heart (x2)
these memories
of catastrophes
a shot in the dark
don't make a mark
on a moving target
chances are
I keep taking chances with my heart (repeat)
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Hi Joe,
Cool … I like the disco kind of guitar and drum part. Man, this would sound really cool with a woman singing the lead. Great job so keep it up!
How did you come up with this song?
Thanks, Uncle Brent
April 22, 2021
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Thank you for the feedback. There were two things going on when I started this song. I had the basic track down, using loops from my phone. Then I also had the title. I took the title and brainstormed it using clustering. eventually the song hashed itself out and I wrote the lyric and thaen sang to it.
April 23, 2021
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Uncle Brent ...
Hi Joe,
Cool … I like the disco kind of guitar and drum part. Man, this would sound really cool with a woman singing the lead. Great job so keep it up!
How did you come up with this song?
Thanks, Uncle Brent
April 22, 2021
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