I had a girlfriend that wasn't over her ex. I endured months of it. Listen, and learn all about him.
Have at it folks
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Hey Brother OUTSTANDING SONG!
HAS A GREAT beat smooth flowing melody love the story and the vocals are spot on!
Looking forward to hearing more of your stuff brother!
If your looking for a co- writer hut me up.
March 16, 2025
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"Bella Luna"
Bella Luna, magic surrounds this night.
Bella Luna, the music and mood feel right
He's been sitting all alone a few tables from mine
In a black silk suit, having after dinner wine
Bella Luna I don't want to be too obvious
But this could be serious
Bella Luna I think he's noticed me
Bella Luna his eyes are a beautiful green
He's got jet black hair, not a strand out of place
He's got dimples a mustache, mmmm what a face
Bella Luna he just raised his glass up to me
A toast to uncertainty
Bella Luna he's making his way towards me
Bella Luna the music has stopped suddenly
The only thing I'm hearing is the pounding of my heart
It skips a beat and stops, then decides to start
Bella Luna I've agreed to take my part in this dance
Tonight I offer him my hand
Bella Luna, beautiful moon that you are
Bella Luna, thank you midnight star
Michael Rey
(BMI) 2021
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Hi Michael,
This song has a great feel with sultry vocals. The sax and vocal play on the solo is really good. There’s nothing wrong with this song and it seems like it would be good for sync. My favorite line in the song is “Bella Luna he just raised his glass up to me … A toast to uncertainty.”
Thanks, Uncle Brent
March 18, 2021
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Hey Brother OUTSTANDING SONG!
HAS A GREAT beat smooth flowing melody love the story and the vocals are spot on!
Looking forward to hearing more of your stuff brother!
If your looking for a co- writer hut me up.
March 16, 2025
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Uncle Brent ...
Hi Michael,
This song has a great feel with sultry vocals. The sax and vocal play on the solo is really good. There’s nothing wrong with this song and it seems like it would be good for sync. My favorite line in the song is “Bella Luna he just raised his glass up to me … A toast to uncertainty.”
Thanks, Uncle Brent
March 18, 2021
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