Betcha by Kate Portanova & Paul deMarco ©2021
Never been much of a gambler
I know a sure thing when I see it
You had me running in circles like NASCAR
From the first damn moment that we met
Honey I aint seen you smile in a while
You probably think i don't understand
But I know your tell all too well
Aint it time you showed your hand
Betcha still thinking about me
Late at night when you can’t sleep
Betcha my ghost is all you see
I betcha not as as strong as you pretend to be
When you're walkin' the streets somethin’ LONELY
Betcha still thinking about me
I hear you've settled down now
And you've made a new life without me
But when he holds you close and the lights go down
Are you really where you wanna be?
Chorus
Solo
Bridge
What do you wanna bet you're the one heartbroken?!
Chorus
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Mr. DeMarco,
This song sounds very current. The beat on the verse should be brought up and you might be able to do more of a rap on the verse … Seems like that would give it more of that new country-ish feel. Also, making it a duet or adding a female backing vocals would be pretty cool. As always, it’s like splitting hair but these are the minor things. 
February 21, 2021
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Mr. DeMarco,
This song sounds very current. The beat on the verse should be brought up and you might be able to do more of a rap on the verse … Seems like that would give it more of that new country-ish feel. Also, making it a duet or adding a female backing vocals would be pretty cool. As always, it’s like splitting hair but these are the minor things.
February 21, 2021
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