An old demo I recently found regarding love and betrayal. A little sad for sure. Please let me know what you think.
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ONE MORE PROMISE
words and music by Allan Rosensweig
Subtle promises made in the heat of a passionate moment
They were only words to you, Just a part of casual conversation
But your words dug much deeper than you could foresee
Now its hard to extinguish the fire that burns inside of me
One more promise that my heart believed
Just another line so well received
You got me tied up in chains
And all that remains are echoes of one more promise
In the candlelight I couldn't see the deception in your eyes
And when I held your hand I couldn't tell that you had crossed your fingers
When you said that forever you'd hold onto me
Now it seems all I'm holding is onto your memory
One more promise that my heart believed
Just another line so well received
You got me tied up in chains
And all that remains are echoes of one more promise
Remember we were lovers on those hot August nights
We were shadows til you flipped on the lights
We were over and done like sand castles out in the rain
And one more promise that my heart believed
Just another line so well received
You got me tied up in chains
And all that remains are echoes of one more promise
I'm crying out for you to keep
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