I've never uploaded an unfinished song before... so, here it is... my first work publicly released work in progress. Thoughts welcome all the way around.
This is what makes Frettie so awesome. It doesn’t have to be finished to get great feedback.
I too really like where this going. Like Matt was saying, your lyrics combined with your vocals are really great to listen to. I’d love to see how this progresses along.
December 30, 2013
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Nice flow, chords and melody. Like the lyrics a lot too. It would seem natural to start where you left off strumming full chords with more energy and bringing a higher harmony in. Not to apply rules to it, but I feel like it lends itself to ABABC(or breakdown)BB.
Your songwriting and singing is top notch, worth pursuing as vigorously as possible.
December 29, 2013
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This is what makes Frettie so awesome. It doesn’t have to be finished to get great feedback.
I too really like where this going. Like Matt was saying, your lyrics combined with your vocals are really great to listen to. I’d love to see how this progresses along.
December 30, 2013
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Matt Rees
Nice flow, chords and melody. Like the lyrics a lot too. It would seem natural to start where you left off strumming full chords with more energy and bringing a higher harmony in. Not to apply rules to it, but I feel like it lends itself to ABABC(or breakdown)BB.
Your songwriting and singing is top notch, worth pursuing as vigorously as possible.
December 29, 2013
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