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You in that sexy black dress / your perfume that lingers on me / Your breath on the back of my neck / Your lips when you kiss me / The embrace when you’ve missed me
Pretty obvious what this song is about
All feedback welcome - Good, bad or indifferent. I have been a musician most of my life with 100's of live performances. I have heard it all so you aren't going to hurt my feelings. I don't have any to hurt ..... if you would believe my wife:)
Hey Greyson, Thanks for your input man! I really appreciate you taking the time. I agree with you on the chorus needing to be punched up and definitely agree with you on the vocals. Thats my weak spot. But, I’m not trying to make it big as a vocalist just wanting to get my songs out there. I will check out CLA Vocal though and see how I might be able to improve on what I do put out. Thanks again. I’ll return the favor.
November 04, 2020
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THE THINGS I LOVE (About You)
By Chris Post
You in that sexy black dress and a red wine drenched kiss
And your perfume that lingers on me
When you play with your hair well that’s not even fair and your smile
And the way that you tease
The way that you kiss me the way that you hold me
Your breath on the back of my neck
The way that you love me at the end of the day
And my fingers running down your back
Those are the things I love…..about you
Those are the things I love
I could make a list, I could write ‘em down
And I could go on and on
Cos there ain’t no end to the things I love about you
I could count 'em off never reach the end
I could go on and on
Cos there ain’t no end to the things I love about you
You cuss when you’re mad and you pray when you’re sad
And you laugh at all your own jokes
You love hearts and tattoos, redneck bars and saloons
Cowboy Boots, me and your folks
Your lips when you kiss me the embrace when you’ve missed me
And your eyes as bright as the stars
Girl there ain’t no denying and I’m not even lying
You don't know how pretty you are
Those are the things I love…..about you
Those are the things I love
I could make a list, I could write ‘em down
And I could go on and on
Cos there ain’t no end to the things I love about you
I could count 'em off never reach the end
I could go on and on
Cos there ain’t no end to the things I love about you
Well girl I have to admit that I just can’t predict
What you might say or do next
You’re full of surprises and as hard as I try
I just can’t figure you out
Those are the things I love…..about you
Those are the things I love
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I think the song is pretty good man, I love the verses, i think the place id spend some time is making the chorus hit a little harder. I think the verses are more catchy than the chorus. Your production is pretty good too. I would spend a little time on the vocal, through some plugins on it to make it pop, CLA Vocal is a pretty versatile and easy to use if you don’t have it!
November 04, 2020
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Hey Greyson, Thanks for your input man! I really appreciate you taking the time. I agree with you on the chorus needing to be punched up and definitely agree with you on the vocals. Thats my weak spot. But, I’m not trying to make it big as a vocalist just wanting to get my songs out there. I will check out CLA Vocal though and see how I might be able to improve on what I do put out. Thanks again. I’ll return the favor.
November 04, 2020
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I think the song is pretty good man, I love the verses, i think the place id spend some time is making the chorus hit a little harder. I think the verses are more catchy than the chorus. Your production is pretty good too. I would spend a little time on the vocal, through some plugins on it to make it pop, CLA Vocal is a pretty versatile and easy to use if you don’t have it!
November 04, 2020
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