A song about missed opportunities with a loved one
This song has a great feel and your voice is magic on this song. There’s plenty of room for a bombastic solo if you’re into that. Are you playing through a Vibrolux to get the guitar tone?
February 10, 2021
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VERSE ONE
The way I love you
It breaks my heart when I let you down
And when I hold you
I wish that I could go back around
I’d go back and
CHORUS
Fix things I broke on the way
Light up the smile on your face
And make you feel the way you’d feel if it was true
That all I ever loved was you
VERSE TWO
In the world I owe you
My eyes would tell you come to me
And I’d never show you
The wrecked and fall side you see
I’d only show that I could
CHORUS
BRIDGE
All I ever loved was you
All I ever loved was you
All I ever loved was you
The treasures I’d forsake
The measures I would take
The sacrifice I’d make
If I could go back and
CHORUS
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Dude! super vibey song! I think you have a lot of great content in here, I love the guitar work man but gosh the heart of this song.. the emotion, I wanted some more lyrics man. I think you could have an octave jump in there somewhere to really drive home a last chorus. Just my thoughts, take it or leave it man but I think you got a cool song here!
October 25, 2020
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This song has a great feel and your voice is magic on this song. There’s plenty of room for a bombastic solo if you’re into that. Are you playing through a Vibrolux to get the guitar tone?
February 10, 2021
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greyson campbell
Dude! super vibey song! I think you have a lot of great content in here, I love the guitar work man but gosh the heart of this song.. the emotion, I wanted some more lyrics man. I think you could have an octave jump in there somewhere to really drive home a last chorus. Just my thoughts, take it or leave it man but I think you got a cool song here!
October 25, 2020
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