This song (demo) is an English translation of an Israeli song originally written in Hebrew by Rachel Shapira, one of Israel's premier lyricists. It was composed by Danny Amihod, and it was originally sung by Hava Albershtein in 1978.
Thank you Emmanuel
I’ve translated this song in the spirit of the original to make it apply to the American landscape. Golden eagle, eastern coast, spider lilies, the phrasing, such as “if you will” etc. give the song a feeling of being somewhere in middle America.
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Yaron
October 06, 2020
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Have you seen gray clouds arise
In the farmers' morning eyes
As their neighbors organize
For the blessings in the skies
Someone here is thinking 'bout you
And takes note of where you've gone to
Hurry homeward, if you will
With the autumn's windy chill
Hurry homeward, if you will
With the autumn's windy chill
Scented citrus swell and ripe
In the grove – one at a time
High school teachers cough and gripe
And yawn out a nurs'ry rhyme
In his flaps, a golden eagle
Or perhaps a northern regal
Heat waves end once and for all
Now it's summer's turn to fall
Heat waves end once and for all
Now it's summer's turn to fall
In his flaps, a golden eagle
Or perhaps a northern regal
Heat waves end once and for all
Now it's summer's turn to fall
Heat waves end once and for all
Now it's summer's turn to fall
What will be? They ask and post
In municipal gazettes
While along the eastern coast
Spider lilies cast their nets
What say all the evening papers
And lights up atop skyscrapers
Hurry homeward, if you will
With the autumn's windy chill
Hurry homeward, if you will
With the autumn's windy chill
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I enjoyed the journey. I could see and feel the tenderness and mystery of a place I’ve never been.
October 06, 2020
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Thank you Emmanuel
I’ve translated this song in the spirit of the original to make it apply to the American landscape. Golden eagle, eastern coast, spider lilies, the phrasing, such as “if you will” etc. give the song a feeling of being somewhere in middle America.
Thanks for the comment
Yaron
October 06, 2020
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Emmanuel Carlos St.Omer
I enjoyed the journey. I could see and feel the tenderness and mystery of a place I’ve never been.
October 06, 2020
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