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Sundi Jo gave some good recommendations, didn’t expect the instrumental. Sounded like a Pardy song.
August 14, 2020
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Hey Dan Allen. Thanks for sharing your song!
Do you have the lyrics handy?
Is that your voice singing this song?
August 15, 2020
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Really great song!
One thing I would recommend is shortening instrumental between the chorus and verse 2, and after the second chorus into the full instrumental. I was waiting for the verse to come in, then there was a couple more beats. The instrumental before the second verse could be shorter.
If you’re ever interested in doing some co-writing, I’d love to chat!
August 12, 2020
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Sundi Jo gave some good recommendations, didn’t expect the instrumental. Sounded like a Pardy song.
August 14, 2020
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Hey Dan Allen. Thanks for sharing your song!
Do you have the lyrics handy?
Is that your voice singing this song?
August 15, 2020
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Sundi Jo Graham
Really great song!
One thing I would recommend is shortening instrumental between the chorus and verse 2, and after the second chorus into the full instrumental. I was waiting for the verse to come in, then there was a couple more beats. The instrumental before the second verse could be shorter.
If you’re ever interested in doing some co-writing, I’d love to chat!
August 12, 2020
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