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I had the opening guitar riff that I was playing around with, and the first line I came up with was "She grew up in a small town, a hundred miles south of Atlanta". I changed the she to a he, and started the story. I struggled with the final verse.
I worry that the song is too long at 5 min, 09 sec, but removing anything would take away from the story.
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