This song is about how a mother feels as her child grows up and follows his or her own path. A mother hopes her song is ringing in the distance so her child will hear it and have comfort and remember her good advice.
Although this is an older song I wrote and produced, I always appreciate feedback...thank you.
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Son, may your passage be a happy journey.
May your memory of me guide you through,
the dark and cloudy life...that shadows us all.
Please don’t lose your way.
When you stop to listen,
hear the land speaking to you...to you.
Son, when you walk in the shadows,
look, my shadow’s there too.
Keep your memory of me bright and clear.
No dark and cloudy skies will hurt you at all.
You won’t lose your way.
When you stop to listen,
hear the ice singing to you...to you.
Son, I know that your journey with me will end one day.
Walk along and please remember
...my wish for you is happiness
where ever you may go.
I’m proud that you are strong.
When you stop to listen,
hear my voice whisper,
I’ll miss you...I’ll miss you...
I’ll try not to worry.
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