...Falling in love! After writing it, I produced this song in my kitchen with garageband, so I am very aware of my imperfect pitches at times and novice production skills!
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Verse 1:
You, you brought me back to life
Grabbed my hand, pulled me out of the strife
That was building and building deep inside
Don't, don't go away too soon
Stay with me, stay with me in this room
As the whole world is crashing down and in
Pre-chorus
With you, I am safe
With you, pain fades away
With you, I can feel again
Heavy before, my feet stuck on the ground
Chorus:
But with you I am flying
Flying
Verse 2:
You, you got that look in your face,
like we just won a race
the crowds cheer and we hear our future calling
Pre-chorus
Chorus (repeated 2x)
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My first thought was the piano or organ in the background. I like the song but I would change that . You have a great voice but that piano/organ takes over the song. It could probably be a good country song with the right instrument in the background. This is not a criticism but a suggestion It’s the way the song hits you from the start
April 20, 2023
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Joseph Guerra
My first thought was the piano or organ in the background. I like the song but I would change that . You have a great voice but that piano/organ takes over the song. It could probably be a good country song with the right instrument in the background. This is not a criticism but a suggestion It’s the way the song hits you from the start
April 20, 2023
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