Ah, the way false boasting masks real insecurities.
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I came and saw and wasn't conquered. I took the plunge and wasn't injured. I ran a race and didn't sweat. Tried to lie but haven't yet. I threw the dice and didn't lose. Bought an ounce but didn't use. Crossed the border with no guide. Now my future's open wide. I'm on my way. I took the shot but didn't kill. Called out to you but didn't yell. Held your gaze but did not see. Died but never ceased to be. I'm on my way.
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