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Summery, Uptempo Guitar: Someone lost in the world, dreaming and praying for a helping hand – away from sorrow and the harsh reality.
Fun fact: Major inspiration arose from Disney princess movies, and how our reality can often seem dim and hopeless.
Improvements and lyrical evaluation.
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Verse
Hair in the wind
Lost in the highest tower
You must be waiting for
Someone to open up
Summer on the horizon
All year have been so cold
You must have grown tired
With the same days all over
Pre
I'd be Prince Philip, of sleeping beauty
Go anywhere you wanna go
Promise to let go of yesterday
Give you the kiss, that’ll break the curse
You won’t have to, miss another day
Chorus
It’s gonna be a good day
I know wherever I go
You’ll always be around
Playing my favourite song in the sun ah
Bridge
It’ll go down in history
The culprit of mystery
All gone with the wind
It’s so warm and so tidy
Come along with the tide
No one needs to be alone
No more pressure to make a fortune
Together we could make so much more
Pre
Chorus
It’s gonna be a good day
I know wherever I go
You’ll always be around
Playing my favourite song in the sun ah
Good days will be known by heart
Song in the Sun
Song in my heart is beating
You’re all I’m breathing
Life is a painted art
Too many colours
For shut eyes
Stay in the mind with
The song in the sun
Good days will be known by heart
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Hey, Stian! Thanks for sharing your work with us. I really like the title- the alliteration makes it more memorable, plus it has an image in it. So really strong title that made me want to hear your song.
I like that it’s a positive song. Not that all songs should be positive, but with a title like this, a positive message certainly fits.
January 03, 2020
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Brent Baxter
Hey, Stian! Thanks for sharing your work with us. I really like the title- the alliteration makes it more memorable, plus it has an image in it. So really strong title that made me want to hear your song.
I like that it’s a positive song. Not that all songs should be positive, but with a title like this, a positive message certainly fits.
January 03, 2020
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