After a very difficult time in my life, I had a realization that my life wasn't over. Although I had to let go of some dreams, I still had time to make some new dreams a reality. It was the revelation I needed to get back to living how I needed to.
Any and all.
Yeah, that bridge morphed a lot when we were in the studio! I decided to just go with it and let it be weirdly unique. Thanks for the feedback!
December 20, 2019
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That country rock guitar lick intro caught my ear! I can relate to the backstory of your song. It’s more pop rock sounding to me other than country. I like bits and pieces of the melody and the production was nice.
I’m not sure if that title is the right one for this song. That word “Lead” is also a chemical element.
I noticed in the lyrics “hearts lead” only appears to the listener four times in the song. Verse one and verse two don’t balance out with each other on the structure. The bridge could use some work. I think the whole song has potential.
I hope that’s all helpful,
Happy ♫♪♪ Songwriting
December 22, 2019
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I'm feeling new, and undefined
My heart is full, and there's plenty of time
To become who we're meant to be
So come on
Let's roll down the windows
Roll down this highway
Let's turn up the radio
We'll be singing all the way
We can't get back time
But there's time left to play
So let's take the long road
And let our hearts lead the way
Let's chase the sun, all the way to the coastline
I'm thanking God, for the breath in these lungs of mine
And I want to sing outloud, and dance into this night
chorus
bridge:
Yeah yeah, we might get caught out in the rain
Hey Hey, here comes the sun again
Can you feel it? I can feel it
So Come on!
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Hey Johnny
I liked the intro and the melody is catchy, enjoyed your chorus very much upbeat and makes you feel good. Truthfully I lost some interest in the bridge, not sure why but going to listen a few more times. Overall though enjoyed it! Thanks for posting
December 20, 2019
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Yeah, that bridge morphed a lot when we were in the studio! I decided to just go with it and let it be weirdly unique. Thanks for the feedback!
December 20, 2019
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That country rock guitar lick intro caught my ear! I can relate to the backstory of your song. It’s more pop rock sounding to me other than country. I like bits and pieces of the melody and the production was nice.
I’m not sure if that title is the right one for this song. That word “Lead” is also a chemical element.
I noticed in the lyrics “hearts lead” only appears to the listener four times in the song. Verse one and verse two don’t balance out with each other on the structure. The bridge could use some work. I think the whole song has potential.
I hope that’s all helpful,
Happy ♫♪♪ Songwriting
December 22, 2019
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Mike McCorison
Hey Johnny
I liked the intro and the melody is catchy, enjoyed your chorus very much upbeat and makes you feel good. Truthfully I lost some interest in the bridge, not sure why but going to listen a few more times. Overall though enjoyed it! Thanks for posting
December 20, 2019
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