About being the Fall Back guy your lifetime "girl-friend" can always rely on and fall back on.
Written by Marcus Wadell and Michael Saleta(me)
Hey Johnny thanks for listening and your feedback, i appreciate your perspective, cheers
December 01, 2019
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Hi Michael
I really like this song as it flows really nice. I agree with Johnny the chorus could have been more dramatic muscially. Like the pre chorus’s to set up the chorus. Overall nice listening song and thanks for sharing.
December 08, 2019
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Written by Marcus Wadell & Michael Saleta
Demo by Marcus Wadell
Vocals: Marcus Wadell
I’ve known you since first grade
Held your hand about a thousand times
While other kids played
We snuck off and kissed beneath the pines
We were ordinary, livin young lives, so carefree
Just cry babies, getting pushed down - scrapin our knees
Whenever you fall -
(CHORUS)
You can fall back to me
When you need some reassuring
You can fall back to me
Whenever life treats you poorly
So just close your eyes
And put your trust in me
You can fall without looking when you
Fall back to me
We meet at that same bar
Every time a boy has done you wrong
I know life got so hard
Been that way since your momma’s gone yeah
We were ordinary, livin our lives,
But its getting heavyy
Your eyes are teary, use my shoulder, come on lean in
Whenever you fall -
(CHORUS)
You can fall back to me
When you need some reassuring
You can fall back to me
Whenever life treats you poorly
So just close your eyes
And put your trust in me
You can fall without looking when you
Fall back to meeeeee
Fall back to me
Always been there for-ya
Got me in your back pocket
I wanna be something more
But even if you’re not about it
You can fall back to me
You can fall, you can fall
(CHORUS)
You can fall back to me
When you need some reassuring
You can fall back to me
Whenever life treats you poorly
So just close your eyes
And put your trust in me
You can fall without looking when you
Fall back to me
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I loved the verses. Lyrics do a nice job of showing, with solid statement phrases. When we get to the chorus, I was all geared up for something big, but it felt like the busyness of the melody took some momentum away. As a listener, I was ready for a textural change there, i.e. longer, held notes that would easily singable. Overall, a fun pop tune!
November 22, 2019
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Hey Johnny thanks for listening and your feedback, i appreciate your perspective, cheers
December 01, 2019
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Hi Michael
I really like this song as it flows really nice. I agree with Johnny the chorus could have been more dramatic muscially. Like the pre chorus’s to set up the chorus. Overall nice listening song and thanks for sharing.
December 08, 2019
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Johnny Guest
I loved the verses. Lyrics do a nice job of showing, with solid statement phrases. When we get to the chorus, I was all geared up for something big, but it felt like the busyness of the melody took some momentum away. As a listener, I was ready for a textural change there, i.e. longer, held notes that would easily singable. Overall, a fun pop tune!
November 22, 2019
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