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A girl named rozanna made me fall in love for the first time. I never got her so I wrote a song about this. It is not just about love, it is about how the years go by and how we find other love, but at the same time you do not forget the old.
I have a hard time getting lyrics together. since I write the songs first in Swedish I do not always get them together in English
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I open a new chapter
I try to let the old one pass me
but I know it's not that easy
I'm afraid
that something is in the way
something that keeps me away
I think I surviving
without you I'm dying
Rozanna it feels like I'm cying
but I do not know why
I just do not know how
last night i thought of love i never had
it hurt and it made me sad
so I went up
and started writing this song again
and life will never be the same for an old man
life is like a ticking bomb
I might be right or wrong
Day after day
and month after month
years have gone by
but i aint gonna cry
i hold on till the day that i die
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OK, the good is I like the tune and the guitar. I figure that English is not your native tongue. That may be why I am confused of the “tory” of the song.
If I guess, you have a love lost. You’re writing this song… again… so that you can survive without the one you’ve lost.
My suggestion, figure out what you’re wanting to say to the person this song is directed to. You’re either surviving or dying. You’re looking at how to move on, or plan to stay in the “muck.”
Again, the tune excited me, but, the words lose me. Good luck!
September 10, 2019
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OK, the good is I like the tune and the guitar. I figure that English is not your native tongue. That may be why I am confused of the “tory” of the song.
If I guess, you have a love lost. You’re writing this song… again… so that you can survive without the one you’ve lost.
My suggestion, figure out what you’re wanting to say to the person this song is directed to. You’re either surviving or dying. You’re looking at how to move on, or plan to stay in the “muck.”
Again, the tune excited me, but, the words lose me. Good luck!
September 10, 2019
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